
atop perched shadows,
S’lene strikes the hearts of pale plumes –
a murder of crows
Could this be the dark side of the moon, or has the white flame just charred sadness with her warmth; I’d love to hear your thoughts and interpretations.
By the way, feel free to read the first of the series, Moonglow if fascinated with wordplay and nature.
Do have a lovely start to your week and till next time, Ciao.
Cheemnonso
Oh this is Lovely!!
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I’m glad you found this lovely, Rene. Much appreciated 🌜🌹
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Lovely haiku and image!
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Happy you love it, Freya; thank you🌹🌛
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Loved this.
Gwen.
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Happy you loved it, Gwen. Thanks🌛🌹
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Love this and love crows
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Glad that you love the piece; and btw, no crows were harmed in the process😅🌹
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Yes. We have murders of ravens at The Holler.
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😯! That must be a sight, hopefully not too ominous😅.
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love this, I’ve borrowed you Haiku and built it into a new Tanka Poem, which I will give credit and publish soon, hope you like it
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I’m happy you love it, Paul, and glad it’s of some inspiration – Looking forward to seeing your poem🙂.
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I have posted, its called Shutter and Wings
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I have poted the poem, its called Shutter and Wings
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Enjoyed your haiku. You need to post more often. 😊
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Thanks John, and yes, that’s something I look forward to😊.
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